Succinctly Yours – All things change

No one else believed Atlantis would rise.

The transition found him waiting, vindicated but alone, even at the end.

Would that change, now?

How low can you go? I’m at 136 characters, 4 fewer than the maximum 140 (you can also go for 140 words instead). It’s microfiction fun, where you write the short-but-sweet stories based on an image  prompt. There’s also a word prompt (this week, it’s transition), if you want more challenge. I used to do this at Stony River, but the  site’s down. Happily, I discovered a nice community of microfictioneers hosted at Grandma’s Goulash. Join the fun!


6 thoughts on “Succinctly Yours – All things change

  1. I did it there too and it was/is one of my favorite memes. Thanks for the visits, and you have my prayers. So sorry.

  2. Oh my Goodness! 🙂 Vindicated but still alone, in a different way. Perhaps now he can have a fresh start.

    I too was writing µ-fiction at Stoney River. Guess we didn’t ever meet there, Susan was a busy lady on that meme. I am glad GMa is continuing with the idea.

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